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Wednesday 6 June 2018

water bucket narrative




Today we had to show what we can write when we have 40 minutes to write without talking to others we were able to work quietly to complete the task
P1
Once upon a time there was a big water bucket and there were some animals thirsty. There were bees,birds,(one) rabbit,(one) donkey,rosters and a bull. They were all thirsty and the bees saw the water bucket. They were flying and they were really tired so they can’t fly fast. and everyone else saw the water bucket to so they were going there to but they were also tired so they walk slow. but they are faster than the bees.

P2
They were walking the rabbit is faster than all of them because it hops. and the bees landed on the bull and the bull was speeding up. but the rabbit was in front of everybody the bees were getting a little bit more of the energy. And now they fly faster than all of them and they are in front of the rabbit. and the birds are speeding up and the birds are now at the rabbit. and they are slowing down the birds have now past the rabbit.

P3
The bees are really speeding up and the birds are really fast so are the bees. and the bull is at the back they are all moving fast they are so fast. they are almost there the bees are there and drinking.

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