Narritive writing plan

One morning there was this boy Kauri and he was walking then suddenly a floating island. He Said” that looks like an engineers palace” and then an engineer just walked out of the palace. The engineer was out there and then his slave just realised there was gold and the slave told the engineer. The engineer wanted to build a big strong machine the energy is melted gold. Kauri found out and he Keeped it a secret and then the island suddenly fell down. Then Kauri ran back to his house and had lunch well he was eating lunch the engineer was building. And he snuck in the building and he saw the power plug and pulled it out and the robot that was mining blew up. And the engineer got a fright and got a hard attack.

That really stinks Writing

Sam was in the toilet room with his sisters phone making fart noises like he was going toilet. then the monster came and took the phone. the monster went on a crocodile to its lair and the same with Sam. Sam entered the monsters lair to get his sisters phone and hid behind the rock then he throws some mud behind them they all look. then he grabs the phone and ran away.

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Once upon a time there was a kid could Kahurangi and he had heaps of food in his house. He had black hair and brown eyes and he eats a lot. And there was a monster it was tall, smart and fast. Then there was this person could Kauri and he was hungry so he followed the monster. The monster had a picture of Kahurangi‘s friend.

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Task description: i worked with rae jae and i helped him with his word his word was supposed to put in slime but he put in smile.

narrative writing

Task Description: we had to do our plan for writing

Narrative writing

There was a teacher and two students the teachers name was Mr. Gandalf well he was working with someone. Bilbo was using chat with Frodo they both have black hair and they both have blue eyes. They were talking about their work they then got into telling each other jokes to each other.





To be continued…