Task Description: we had to write sentences about each of the pictures and we had to stick to one main idea. and it had a volcano, haunted house, person walking the dogs and two people having a run.
I really enjoyed your description of the volcano! I can also tell you are trying to only include one main idea which is fantastic! Heres an example of how to do that with the dog picture (which I know was not as exciting as the others)
Barbara took her two dogs on a walk. The spaniels tugged at their leads in excitement, trying to get close to every cyclist, pedestrian and animal in sight. This was their favourite time of day; an opportunity to stretch their legs and feel the grass beneath their paws.
So the whole paragraph is about this walk and how the dogs feel about it.
Hi Kauri,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your description of the volcano! I can also tell you are trying to only include one main idea which is fantastic! Heres an example of how to do that with the dog picture (which I know was not as exciting as the others)
Barbara took her two dogs on a walk. The spaniels tugged at their leads in excitement, trying to get close to every cyclist, pedestrian and animal in sight. This was their favourite time of day; an opportunity to stretch their legs and feel the grass beneath their paws.
So the whole paragraph is about this walk and how the dogs feel about it.