As the extremely athletic Basketball play takes two steps closer to the hoop while he is soaring through the air. As he reaches the right height he starts to raise his and in mid air, someone else jumps up from the other team with extraordinary power and height he is there to block but the person with the ball is there and not giving up he slams on the hoop right pass the person blocking looking down on him as he looks at the time. The crowd goes wild he scored a buzzer beater with the win by one point.
so good Kauri
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DeleteYou are right Kauri (s), this is good! You used heaps of adjectives and had a great idea for the scene. Next time you could do a little more crafting or editing of your sentences - the middle one in particular is very long and perhaps could be broken up into a few sentences. Its awesome to see you writing in the lockdown though!
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