WALT: craft clear sentences
Task Description: we had to do what it told us to do and answer everything it asked us to answer we also had to say a conversation with a family member and make it more clear and the blue writing was me speaking and the red was my dad.
Hi Kauri,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing your writing for today! You are awesome. I really like the conversation you wrote at the end - adding more detail and including the names of the people talking gave our audience more idea about what was going on. In person it would make sense because you have facial expression, body language....but most importantly, you already know a lot about each other and school, such as team five being the oldest group.
Keep up the great blogging!