write like Paul Jennings writing

WALT: write using the structure of a narrative.






One day a boy named Kauri, woke up from his sleep and noticed a room. He was forbidden from this room.

He was going to play outside, but then he saw the sign with the word forbidden and he froze. Then he turned towards it and he knew he was not supposed to go in but he was so curious he could not stop himself. He went towards it but suddenly his dad shouted “BREAKFAST IS READY!” so he went to the table. Kauri saw five cereal bowls on the table and he saw his sister, brother, mum and dad at the table eating their breakfast. So he sat down and ate to, when he was finished he went outside to play.



He was playing on his trampoline he got bored so he went inside to read a book he was going to his room and the forbidden door disappeared. He had a plan it was when it was time for him to go to bed he would sneak in the forbidden room. So late that night he waited when his mum and dad went to sleep when they fell asleep. He opened his door and he went into the forbidden room and he saw this machine thing he did not no what it was. He was going towards it and he went in it he saw multiple buttons and he thought it was fake but when he pushed the blue button and it shut the door and gave him a fright. When he got the fright he jumped and hit a lever. He was worried when he tried opening the door with the blue button but there were so many blue buttons. So he just pressed all of the buttons and he accidentally activated the machine and it burst out smoke. And evolved into a wizard with a magical staff.

He went out of the room and he was disappointed on himself and he told his dad the next day. His dad was trying to find a spell and as Kauri was doing jobs he was grounded. He was so angry at himself when he found out that he had to do garden work as well. And his dad came out happy and tried to make Kauri back to himself but it just made him faster and he could do jobs faster. Then his dad got a little bit annoyed and went inside but he practised this one spell and then he got it and tested it and his son was back to normal. But he was still grounded and still had to do jobs.




Task Description:

We had to write like Paul Jennings narrative i was so excited.

Mission Recount

WALT: Structure a recount correctly

Today are teacher took us on a super secret mission. He was acting like a real general it was hilarious .


The first activity that we did was marching we had to listen to General Goodwin first we lined up straight. He told us to be shoulder to shoulder next to the person next to you and when we started to walk he started saying left right left right. We were listening very careful to him because of his strict hilarious voice. He would tell you to wipe your smile off your faces.


The second exercise we did was sneaking we were going to sneak across the class near by without a noise. Some people were making noises on purpose which is annoying. Some people were taking it serious A.K.A Moui. When i was sneaking across i was walking normally without a sound some people were crouching down. We were so bad at the sneaking one i heard it when we finished and people were still walking on it.


After that we did fitness we did push ups i was one of the first one who finished the actual push ups. When we finished the push ups General Goodwin said that we won’t last a day out in the war. Then he said we have to do ten sit ups i was zooming through them. Then he said we have to balance and we stood on one leg it was easy and we had to wave our hands in the air.

He took us back to class doing all of the activities for coming back to the class.
i had fun it was so crazy at first and weird about all of it.
I felt dumb at first then i got used to it and i liked it so much.

Task Description:

Today our teacher took us out so we can do a recount. it was like he was an actual general

extention

Gangsta Granny

WALT: know what the expectations and routines are for reading time.

Task Description:

We had to make a wanted poster about someone who stole the crown jewels from the London tower

My about me for 2019

WALT: write about ourselves on the internet in a cybersmart way.

Kia Ora welcome to my blog again hope you like my posts. My name is Kauri,i am a year 6 at Pt England school. My amazing teacher is Mr Goodwin, i am in room 7. because the teachers decided who they would choose. I enjoy to go to the beach and the pools to swim, because when i swim it is nice and cold when it is hot. I like to eat homemade food, because it’s a good experience for me and it is delicious. my Favorite set of movies are marvel movies. I play a soccer game on Tuesday, and soccer training on Sunday morning. On the weekend morning we play Xbox games. I have a one year old puppy named Mack, and a seventeen year old cat i have 11 brothers and two sisters.














Task Description:
For this task we were given a template from Mr Goodwin to write about ourselves for the about me section on our blog. We had to think about our different interests, hobbies, and information about ourselves in a way that was cybersmart.