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Tuesday 26 February 2019

write like Paul Jennings writing

WALT: write using the structure of a narrative.






One day a boy named Kauri, woke up from his sleep and noticed a room. He was forbidden from this room.


He was going to play outside, but then he saw the sign with the word forbidden and he froze. Then he turned towards it and he knew he was not supposed to go in but he was so curious he could not stop himself. He went towards it but suddenly his dad shouted “BREAKFAST IS READY!” so he went to the table. Kauri saw five cereal bowls on the table and he saw his sister, brother, mum and dad at the table eating their breakfast. So he sat down and ate to, when he was finished he went outside to play.



He was playing on his trampoline he got bored so he went inside to read a book he was going to his room and the forbidden door disappeared. He had a plan it was when it was time for him to go to bed he would sneak in the forbidden room. So late that night he waited when his mum and dad went to sleep when they fell asleep. He opened his door and he went into the forbidden room and he saw this machine thing he did not no what it was. He was going towards it and he went in it he saw multiple buttons and he thought it was fake but when he pushed the blue button and it shut the door and gave him a fright. When he got the fright he jumped and hit a lever. He was worried when he tried opening the door with the blue button but there were so many blue buttons. So he just pressed all of the buttons and he accidentally activated the machine and it burst out smoke. And evolved into a wizard with a magical staff.




He went out of the room and he was disappointed on himself and he told his dad the next day. His dad was trying to find a spell and as Kauri was doing jobs he was grounded. He was so angry at himself when he found out that he had to do garden work as well. And his dad came out happy and tried to make Kauri back to himself but it just made him faster and he could do jobs faster. Then his dad got a little bit annoyed and went inside but he practised this one spell and then he got it and tested it and his son was back to normal. But he was still grounded and still had to do jobs.




Task Description:

We had to write like Paul Jennings narrative i was so excited.

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