Wanted poster Mama

WALT:visualise the characters in the story based on their descriptions.

Task Description: we had to do a wanted poster for mama she is not wanted but we still had to do a wanted poster.

Thirst dialogue

WALT: understand how a character is feeling based on their dialogue.

Task Description: I had to do a dialogue about this journal that I have read.

write that dialogue

WALT: understand how a character is feeling based on their dialogue.
Task Description:Today I had to finish my dialogue in peoples feeling with saying there lines. With the box of there emotions.

Measurement

WALT: convert units of measurement.


Task Description:Today we had to make similarities with the mass, length and capacity.

year 5 and 6 camp

WALT: write in paragraphs

Today we are writing about Year 5 and 6 Camp we were doing activities they put up the tents and the marque.



Camp is a fun day at school, it gives people a fun experience for kids and helpers Thank you helpers! Miss Tuiā was our camp teacher our camp leaders were Madi and Simon, it started Wednesday to Friday. We did it for fun we did, we slept in a tent and we did killer zone, cyclo ball, Mangere Pools,
Kayaking,Concert Night/ Practice, Movie night - Small Foot, Hall Activities:
Skateboarding
Scooters
Ramps
Ping pong/ Table tennis
Trampoline/ Flip mat
Jump Jam


Out of all of the activities my favorite was killer zone with Mr Jacobson. I liked it because it was giving me even more energy for camp then i had before camp started. My other favorite camp project was the concert we were the group called Batay it stands for children in filipino. My team leaders are Simon and Madi we worked on our chant it didn’t take long. The concert was surprising because my group was up first and i thought we would be third to.


The concert was making me nervous because i had to perform in front of some adults that I don’t know. When it was time to sleep i heard a lot of talking outside my tent the first night. I tried sleeping the whole night but it did not work at all. The second sleep was way better, i had more energy to do jump jam in the hall.


All of this fun wouldn’t be possible without the helpers so i will just have to say thank you helpers. I like to say thanks for all the help that gave us for fun time it was so helpful. I would also say thanks to Mrs Haere for the extra fun.


Task Description: we used a template to design our paragraphs to help us think and write.

Pass the story V1

WAlT : punctuate our work  

Original version

One morning this watermelon went walking down the street with a bag and he had a lot of fruit. Then this burger came by and said wow healthy food is yuck and the watermelon sad so the watermelon cried seeds.Then some friends came and made him feel better. After he felt good again he saw the burger and fries chilling. Then they saw Watermelon  so they purposely came and said “why don’t you just go drink coke and he said why can you see me man go away you man with a coke on your big big big big big big big big big big big big big big big big big big four head man look at it you big big big big big big big big big big big head man go away just look at it you big head. I love myself I like to eat some patties and buns . But i do not like to my toes and also I don’t like le tos. I love fries to. Then I ate it the patties and then I had to go to the hospital. When I got out of hospital I told myself I will only eat healthy things.

Edited version

One morning this Watermelon went walking down the street with a bag and he had a lot of fruit. Then this Burger came by and said “wow healthy food is yuck” and the Watermelon got sad so the Watermelon cried seeds.Then some friends came and made him feel better. After he felt good again he saw the Burger and Fries chilling. Then they saw Watermelon so they purposely came and said “why don’t you just go drink coke” and he said “why are you being mean man go away”. “Man with a coke on your big big four head man look at it you big big head man go away just look at it you big head”. “I love myself I like to eat some patties and buns” . But i do not like to eat my toes. I love fries to. Then I ate it the patties and then I had to go to the hospital. When I got out of hospital I told myself I will only eat healthy things.

Task Description:

we played a game called pass the story we would write a little bit of the story and then pass it to the person next to us. They would then continue on the story. After the story was finished, we had to do this writing and fix it up.

Making connections

WALT: make connections with the text as you read.

Task Description: we had to compare Mitchell's camp with my camp with the green is Mitchell's camp blue is both camps and orange is my camp.