I am a Year 8 learner in room 4 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Stone.
Monday, 26 November 2018
Narritive writing plan
One morning there was this boy Kauri and he was walking then suddenly a floating island. He Said” that looks like an engineers palace” and then an engineer just walked out of the palace. The engineer was out there and then his slave just realised there was gold and the slave told the engineer. The engineer wanted to build a big strong machine the energy is melted gold. Kauri found out and he Keeped it a secret and then the island suddenly fell down. Then Kauri ran back to his house and had lunch well he was eating lunch the engineer was building. And he snuck in the building and he saw the power plug and pulled it out and the robot that was mining blew up. And the engineer got a fright and got a hard attack.
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